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The One With Many Faces by ~Slightly-Odd:iconSlightly-Odd:



I have many faces.
My face is the mask you wear at Halloween. The pale, fanged face you imagine in the dark. My face is the face of the monster in your nightmares, the face you've seen a hundred thousand times - in horror films, in dreams, in the most-avoided recesses of your mind.
My face is the face that accompanies a knife in the dark. The crazed, wild-eyed face you catch a brief glimpse of behind the gun as the bullet finds its way towards your fragile shell of a body. My face is the executioner's mask, the judge as he passes a death sentence.
My face is the face of the childhood bully who still taunts and humiliates, decades on. The face of the abusive parent or partner who haunts your thoughts and dreams for the rest of your life.
My face is the face you see on the news - the flat, soulless eyes, the utter lack of human emotion - the face you look so confidently, so arrogantly at, safe in the knowledge that that face will never come for you. That it won't be the last thing you see. That that face only hurts other people.
But I have other faces.
My face is the nebulous childhood Bogeyman, the werewolf's slavering teeth and mad, yellow eyes. My face is the face of a wild beast, of madness, of cold, cruel sanity.
My face is the face of the doctor, telling you that someone is never coming back. My face is the face of the policeman, knocking at the door at three am with news of a car crash.
My face is the face in the mirror, reminding you of every little failure and humiliation until the cracks in the mirror and the blood on your hands embody everything that's wrong.
My face is the face of a loved one, cold and pale and empty. My face is the face of the specialist who tells you, with the clinical manner that always signifies bad news, that you have months or perhaps weeks to live.
My face is the face you see when you close your eyes.
My face is the face you never want to see.
My face is the face that comes for everyone, eventually.
What face will you see?
©2009 ~Slightly-Odd
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Author's Comments

Uh, yeah. So this is my entry for :iconmidnight53:'s contest [link] (prompt: the one with many faces. Hence the title). And this is the only idea I had, for a prompt that interesting? I swear, my mind is stuck on the 'dark and morbid' setting. Which is why my entry for Kibirkstele's contest turned out so sucky.
Anyway, my rambling and dark-and-morbid-ness aside, this is one of the few things I've written that's fit for uploading in ages, and I'm sure this idea seemed so much better when I thought of it. But I swear I'll forget to upload it in time if I decide to leave it and edit it more, so here it is.
I might decide to edit again before the contest closes. Midnight, I'll note you if I do.
And damnit, I can't request advanced critique anymore! :| But yes, advice would be nice :)

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:iconmidnight53:
Thank you for entering the contest! I'll comment more when the contest is over. :)

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:iconkira73:
The crazed, wild eyed face you catch a brief glimpse of behind the gun as the bullet finds its way towards your fragile shell of a body. Needs to be hyphenated.

My face is the face of the childhood bully that still taunts and humiliates, decades on. The face of the abusive parent or partner that haunts your thoughts and dreams for the rest of your life. The 'that's should be 'who's.

My face is the face you see on the news - the flat, soulless eyes, the utter lack of human emotion - the face you look so confidently, so arrogantly at, safe in the knowledge [that that] face will never come for you. [That that] face won't be the last thing you see. [That that] face only hurts other people. Is there any way to reword this to rid the slew of double 'that's?

My face is the face of the doctor, telling you that someone is never coming back. My face is the face of the policeman, knocking at the door at three [IN THE MORNING] [DELETEam] with news of a car crash.

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I like this. Fear takes many interesting shapes. The doctor ones scared me the most.

Just a few suggestions. :D

Good luck in the contest!

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~Pararoms and romanticas~
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No problem :)

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:iconslightly-odd:
Thank you! :)
*goes to edit mistakes* Those double 'that's are annoying me, but I can't think of a way to reword em :/
Thanks!

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:iconkira73:
I was trying to thing of a way to reword them too. Stumped...

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I just changed one or two of em - I forget - to 'it's. Not perfect, but it'll do until I can think of something better.

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